Mahtab’s Story Essay

INTRODUCTION I1. Overcoming Obstacles shows a journey of where an individual is facing serious difficulties in life, and then finds ways to overcome their personal trials. (Thesis/Main idea) I2. Mahtab’s Story, a novel by one of Australia’s best-loved children’s authors – Libby Gleeson, is inspired by true events through the main character Mahtab and her family’s experiences of Overcoming Obstacles. (Introducing your texts) I3. Mahtab’s Story explores Overcoming Obstacles through the character’s events, such as (1) Mahtab being responsible in taking care and protecting her younger siblings, (2) accepting their loss of belongings in order for Mahtab’s family to travel to Australia and (3) being open to Australia’s culture in their life. (Arguments) BODY (FIRST) Point= Example= Technique: Explanation= Overcoming Obstacles: Overcoming Obstacles shows a journey of where an individual is facing serious difficulties in life, and then finds ways to overcome their personal trials. (Thesis) Mahtab being responsible in taking care and protecting her younger siblings 1. Topic Sentence: In Mahtab’s Story, the main character has the expectation of taking care and protecting her younger sibling which she Mahtab is a young girl who has two younger siblings, named Farhad and Soroya. It is her task to make sure that they are safe and entertain them. This is a large responsibility and expectation for a 12 years old girl. ‘Mahtab cuddled her and said, ‘dad would never let anything bad happened to you’. This is an example of direct speech where Mahtab lives up to her expectation as an older sibling by providing care and protection for her sister. 2. Link back to Introduction / essay question. 3. of leaving their loved ones and friends behind 4. Mahtab’s family were afraid of the Taliban and had fear in their country. They left in secret marking the beginning of their journey from Afghanistan and to Australia. (SECOND) Overcoming Obstacles shows a journey of where an individual is facing serious difficulties in life, and then finds ways to overcome their personal trials. (Thesis) accepting their loss of belongings in order for Mahtab’s family to travel to Australia P Mahtab and her family were forced to give away almost everything they had with them in order to safely travel to Australia. ‘Mahtab slid the bracelet into her hand. ‘Give them this, Mum.’ She pressed the bracelet into her mother’s hand. T: Kinesthetic Imagery E : This is an example of Overcoming Obstacles as Mahtab had volunteered to give up her beloved Grandmother’s bracelet in order to help her family travel overseas. (THIRD) Topic Sentence: P Mahtab and her family went to Australia knowing that they have to learn a new language, learn about their culture and to leave behind Afghanistan. Repetition is shown in ‘Stranger in a strange land. This is not my place. These are not my people.’ E – At first, Mahtab’s family thought that they will get the opportunity to have a better life and freedom. Overcoming Obstacles is seen as this quote accurately shows how Mahtab’s family escaped Afghanistan though they feel very sad, uncomfortable and unwelcome in Australia; instead of freedom, they are sent to a detention centre. Link back to question. CONCLUSION I1. Overcoming Obstacles shows a journey of where an individual is facing serious difficulties in life, and then finds ways to overcome their personal trials. Mahtab’s Story written by Libby Gleeson is based on by true events as the main character experiences of Overcoming Obstacles. Mahtab’s Story shows Overcoming Obstacles through events in the novel, such as Mahtab being responsible in taking care and protecting her younger siblings, accepting  their loss of belongings in order for Mahtab’s family to travel to Australia and being open to Australia’s culture in their life. Mahtab and her family members had seriously faced a lot of difficult challenges throughout them travelling from Afghanistan to Australia without being seen by anyone. This Overcoming Obstacle of what Mahtab and her family faced like Losing everything they got, more expectation from Mahtab and moving to another country are very strong and amazingly accomplished.